Outline
Topic sentence : Ciggarete smoking
damages a person’s heart and lungs.
Major supporting
sentence 1 :
1
Ciggarete contains many dangerous things that can damage our body. It
consist of Nicotine, Carbon monoxide, Tar and tobacco which can
damage our heart.
Minor supporting
sentence :
1
The nicotine in ciggarete stimulates our body to produce adrenaline which
makes our heart beats faster and increase the blood pressure and risk for heart attack.
2
Another substance in ciggarete is Carbon
monoxide. Carbon monoxide is a poisonous gas that
replaces oxygen in your blood, making your heart beat faster.
3
The combination of Carbon monoxide and tobacco rob your heart, brain and arteries of oxygen.
4
Ciggarete smoking damage the artery layer by heaping fat which squeeze the
artery.
Major supporting sentence 2 :
1. Not only damage
your heart, ciggarete smoking also have bad effect for your lungs.
Minor supporting sentence :
1. Tar
is a sticky substance that coats your lungs like soot
in a chimney, making it harder for you to breathe, and that contains dozens of
chemicals that cause cancer.
2. It also increase the mucus of lungs which cause lungs cancer.
Concluding sentence
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