Senin, 16 Desember 2013

outline of “The Weaknesses of Cigarette Smoking for Our Body”


Outline
Topic sentence                        : Ciggarete smoking damages a person’s heart and lungs.
Major supporting sentence 1   :
1        Ciggarete contains many dangerous things that can damage our body. It consist of Nicotine, Carbon monoxide, Tar and tobacco which can damage our heart.
Minor supporting sentence      :
1        The nicotine in ciggarete stimulates our body to produce adrenaline which makes our heart beats faster and increase the blood pressure and risk for heart attack.
2        Another substance in ciggarete is Carbon monoxide. Carbon monoxide is a poisonous gas that replaces oxygen in your blood, making your heart beat faster.
3        The combination of Carbon monoxide and tobacco rob your heart, brain and arteries of oxygen.
4        Ciggarete smoking damage the artery layer by heaping fat which squeeze the artery.

Major supporting sentence 2   :
1.      Not only damage your heart, ciggarete smoking also have bad effect for your lungs.
Minor supporting sentence      :
1.      Tar is a sticky substance that coats your lungs like soot in a chimney, making it harder for you to breathe, and that contains dozens of chemicals that cause cancer.
2.      It also increase the mucus of lungs which cause lungs cancer.
Concluding sentence               :
1        In short, ciggarete has many dangerous substances which can damage our healthiness.

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