Outline of Canteen “Seru” during Weekdays (Revise)

Title                             : Canteen “Seru” during Weekdays

Topic sentence            : Canteen “Seru” is the most crowded canteen in Kampus Bawah in  

                                     which provides a lot of things for the students during weekdays and   

                                     there are also various activities there.

Major supporting sentence and minor supporting sentence:

1.      Major supporting sentence 1:

When we come to canteen “Seru”, we will see so many things and people who are doing various activities.

Minor supporting sentence 1:

-          Canteen “Seru”provides a lot of snacks, bread, noodles, crackers, candies, and also rice pockets as their food.

-          There are also soft drinks, tea, coffee as their drinks.

-          Not just food and drink, canteen “Seru” also has stove, bowls, spoons, forks, spatula, knives, pots, plates, frying pan and glasses to support the activities there.

-          In the canteen “Seru”, we can see the seller do a lot of activities such as washing and cooking.

-          All of buyers also can do some activities while waiting for their food, they sit and having chat each other.

-          Sometimes, the students eat or drink their meal at the canteen but some of them prefer to bring it to the class.

-          Canteen “Seru” have two sellers, they can serve some things that the buyers want.

-          They can be waiter or cashier.

-          Buyers just need to order what they want, then the waiter will come to serve their order .

-          After finishing their meal, they can pay it to the cashier.

2.      Major supporting sentence 2:

Food and drink which are served in this canteen have different taste.

Minor supporting sentence 2:

-          In general, the taste of the food in canteen Seru is very delicious, but if you want to have your own taste you can ask them to make it more spicy, sweet, salty or even more crispy.

-          The refrigerator is full of sweet and fresh drink.

3.      Major supporting sentence 3:

The smell of food and drink often makes the students want to finish the class earlier.

Minor supporting sentence 3:

-          The smell of burning food, delicious, and spicy is like the devil that can disturb students’ concentration.

-          And also, the smell of fragrant drink makes the students cannot endure their thirsty feeling.

Concluding sentence   : canteen “Seru” exactly is a place for students to get some food and drinks but sometimes it can disturb the concentration of students to study during the class.