outline of “The Weaknesses of Cigarette Smoking for Our Body”

Outline

Topic sentence                        : Ciggarete smoking damages a person’s heart and lungs.

Major supporting sentence 1   :

1        Ciggarete contains many dangerous things that can damage our body. It consist of Nicotine, Carbon monoxide, Tar and tobacco which can damage our heart.

Minor supporting sentence      :

1        The nicotine in ciggarete stimulates our body to produce adrenaline which makes our heart beats faster and increase the blood pressure and risk for heart attack.

2        Another substance in ciggarete is Carbon monoxide. Carbon monoxide is a poisonous gas that replaces oxygen in your blood, making your heart beat faster.

3        The combination of Carbon monoxide and tobacco rob your heart, brain and arteries of oxygen.

4        Ciggarete smoking damage the artery layer by heaping fat which squeeze the artery.

Major supporting sentence 2   :

1.      Not only damage your heart, ciggarete smoking also have bad effect for your lungs.

Minor supporting sentence      :

1.      Tar is a sticky substance that coats your lungs like soot in a chimney, making it harder for you to breathe, and that contains dozens of chemicals that cause cancer.

2.      It also increase the mucus of lungs which cause lungs cancer.

Concluding sentence               :

1        In short, ciggarete has many dangerous substances which can damage our healthiness.

Outline of Canteen “Seru” during Weekdays (Revise)

Title                             : Canteen “Seru” during Weekdays

Topic sentence            : Canteen “Seru” is the most crowded canteen in Kampus Bawah in  

                                     which provides a lot of things for the students during weekdays and   

                                     there are also various activities there.

Major supporting sentence and minor supporting sentence:

1.      Major supporting sentence 1:

When we come to canteen “Seru”, we will see so many things and people who are doing various activities.

Minor supporting sentence 1:

-          Canteen “Seru”provides a lot of snacks, bread, noodles, crackers, candies, and also rice pockets as their food.

-          There are also soft drinks, tea, coffee as their drinks.

-          Not just food and drink, canteen “Seru” also has stove, bowls, spoons, forks, spatula, knives, pots, plates, frying pan and glasses to support the activities there.

-          In the canteen “Seru”, we can see the seller do a lot of activities such as washing and cooking.

-          All of buyers also can do some activities while waiting for their food, they sit and having chat each other.

-          Sometimes, the students eat or drink their meal at the canteen but some of them prefer to bring it to the class.

-          Canteen “Seru” have two sellers, they can serve some things that the buyers want.

-          They can be waiter or cashier.

-          Buyers just need to order what they want, then the waiter will come to serve their order .

-          After finishing their meal, they can pay it to the cashier.

2.      Major supporting sentence 2:

Food and drink which are served in this canteen have different taste.

Minor supporting sentence 2:

-          In general, the taste of the food in canteen Seru is very delicious, but if you want to have your own taste you can ask them to make it more spicy, sweet, salty or even more crispy.

-          The refrigerator is full of sweet and fresh drink.

3.      Major supporting sentence 3:

The smell of food and drink often makes the students want to finish the class earlier.

Minor supporting sentence 3:

-          The smell of burning food, delicious, and spicy is like the devil that can disturb students’ concentration.

-          And also, the smell of fragrant drink makes the students cannot endure their thirsty feeling.

Concluding sentence   : canteen “Seru” exactly is a place for students to get some food and drinks but sometimes it can disturb the concentration of students to study during the class.

Canteen Seru during Weekdays

As a student of Undiksha Faculty Of Language and Art in Kampus Bawah, all of you

May know about the only one canteen in our campus, right?. Canteen “Seru” is the most crowded canteen in Kampus Bawah in which provides a lot of things for the students during weekdays and there are also various activities there. When we come to canteen “Seru”, we will see so many things and people who are doing various activities. You can see many things there. Canteen seru provides a lot of snack, bread, noodles, crackers, candies, and also rice pockets as their food. Not only about the food, there are also soft drink, tea, and coffee as their drink. Not just food and drink, canteen “Seru” also has stove, bowls, spoons, forks, spatula, knives, pots, plates, frying pan and glasses to support the activities there. Not only those are things, in the canteen “Seru”, we can also see the seller do a lot of activities such as washing and cooking. Canteen “Seru” have two sellers, they can serve some things that the buyers want.  They can be waiter or cashier. Buyers just need to order what they want, then the waiter will come to serve their order . All of buyers also can do some activities while waiting for their food, they sit and having chat each other. Sometimes, the students eat or drink their meal at the canteen but some of them prefer to bring it to the class. After finishing their meal, they can pay it to the cashier. Food and drink which are served in this canteen have different taste. In general, the taste of the food in canteen Seru is very delicious, but if you want to have your own taste you can ask them to make it more spicy, sweet, salty or even more crispy. If you need some drinks, the refrigerator is full of sweet and fresh drink and you can choose them. The smell of food and drink often makes the students want to finish the class earlier. The smell of burning  food, delicious, and spicy is like the devil that can disturb students’ concentration to study at class. And also, sometimes the students cannot endure their thirsty feeling because of the smell of fragrant drinks. So, we can get the point that Canteen “Seru” exactly is a place for students to get some food and drinks but sometimes it can disturb the concentration of students to study during the class.

Outline of “Canteen Seru"

In the Canteen Seru we can :

1        See

a.       Things

·         Food ( snack, bread, noodle, crackers, candies, rice packets )

·         Drink ( soft drink, tea, coffee )

·         Utensil ( stove, bowls, spoons, forks, spoons, spatula, knives, pots, plates, frying pan, glasses )

b.      Activities

·         Washing

·         Cooking

·         Eating

·         Drinking

·         Sitting

·         Chatting

c.       People

·         Cashier

·         Waiters

·         Buyers

2        Taste

a.       Food

·         Salty

·         Delicious

·         Crispy

·         Sweet

·         Tasty

·         Spicy

b.      Drink

·         Fresh

·         Sweet

3        Smell

a.       Food

·         Burn

·         Spicy

·         delicious

b.      Drink

·         Fragrant