Outline “Free Hugs because we’re All The Same “.

Written by Luh Suweni (sayhitomehere.blogspot.com)

Topic sentence :

1.      The man who brought a sign “FREE HUGS” along the street was very brave.

Major supporting sentence :

1.      He was put the sign above of his head to the people.

Minor supporting sentence :

·         People were just staring at him and no one gave him hug anymore

·         An old lady came to him and for the first time gave him a hug and people came to him and make such a gathering to give a hug too.

2.      The important thing that we could see that was happy feeling.

·         Happy feeling makes everything that we faced become easier and less of pressure

·         He made the campaign because he felt sad and alone.

3.      That campaign was banned by the police because they thought that the man was disturbing the citizen.

·         He asked people’s support.

·         He made a petition to get 10.000 signatures from the citizen and the target reached.

·         Give a sign in petition means that the people do support the campaign.

Concluding sentence :

1.      The point is, a hug is the simplest how to cherish people near you because human all the same, we are all the same.

Comment : I think the writing is good. She used appropriate grammar. She wrote it in structured. in conclusion, this writing is good.