Make a messy room becomes clean after party is quite simple with right steps. This is the step you can try at your room. First, you should put everything in your room in appropriate place. Such as, hang the clock, picture and the bookshelf well in the wall. After that, you should put the cloth, pizza box and the phone out of the sofa. Next, put the chair and the table side by side, maybe you can put them in the corner of your room. The second step is, put all the rubbish into the rubbish bin. This step will make your room become cleaner. Next, sweep the floor to make it clean. Finally, set the carpet on the floor.
Happy Trying :)
Your writing is good. But remember to use capital letter after full stop. The word this in second step)
BalasHapusNice to visit your blog :)
maybe if you add some pictures will make your blog more interesting. :)
BalasHapusbut, over all, your writing is good. :)
Thanks for your advise :)
Hapus"First, you should put everything in your room in.... "
BalasHapusmaybe you can use " First Step" not just First. because you use time order " after that and next" after the "first" word and in 7th sentence it seem confusing the reader. but so all so good :)